New RP Rules

Hey guys, its Willowstar again. I have new rules for RP.
When posting, please try to use proper grammar and post more than five sentences each post.

Ex.
BAD: Willowfoot walked into camp and dropped into her nest into the warriors den and fell asleep.
Reason why its bad: Its too short and is a very long grammatically incorrect sentence. XD

GOOD: Willowfoot plodded wearily into the warriors den, tired out from her long day out of camp.  "First a hunting patrol, then a border patrol, and then the Gathering!" she muttered to herself. "What a day!" She picked her way through the sleeping warriors, murmuring an apology when she tripped over someone in the dark. After dropping into her nest, she curled up in the soft green moss, slipping into oblivion.

Does the second one look better? Its more detailed and is an appropriate length, not to mention the sentences are more fixed and complete.